Talk:SMG4/@comment-34968400-20180904143511/@comment-36596195-20180905040705

While I agree with most of what you say, I do have a few complaints with the video itself.

1: Write a script. The video could have been half as long as it was with just as much content if there was a lack of pausing and a better format.

2: Don't be afraid to retake a line if it doesn't come out right.

3: Put something on the screen inbetween showing comments. Having nothing but Black can be draining.

That's all for now. Like I said, I agree with most of what you said. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, I just want the people I critique to learn and improve based on my feedback. Thanks!