Thread:Umbreon The Serial Killer/@comment-35071950-20190530230003/@comment-26227993-20190530235553

.*Claps* Well done,while short each story has great discription and actually manages to include the shit we call 'FNAF lore into it.Idk what else it say other than that its very well done and polished, very descriptive and does a good job of potraying and establishing how each animatronic sees the world/acts.

You broke down alot of cliche potrayals that are usually found in FNAF stories and just...its very refreshing per to say a very diffrent view of the FNAF story.

Very,very well done.Its wonderful to see how far you;ve gotten in this art of writting, how much you have improved.