Thread:1.55.22.52/@comment-3551372-20150508151820

I'm gonna make this very clear to you because I just spent an hour revising your work which was far below a standard I've ever seen.

Do not, do not speak in first person. These are not your opinions of the plot, it's a summary of what happened in the video.

Lots of consonents were preceded with "an" which is basic English; an goes before vowel sounds. A queen. An entertainment industry. An advertisement. A girl. Basic english on the page doesn't look silly. Lots of facts were incorrect, some could've been summed up, and here's my pet peeve; you literally said "I don't want to include them just because I don't like them"

Refer to my previous statement.

'These are not your opinions of the plot, it's a summary of what happened in the video. '

Dislike that bit however much you want, but SMG4 put it up in the video, so you must put it in the plot summary.

Most of the things like the anime, song and eggman pingas questions were jokes, could've mentioned that in the descriptions without acting crazy.

Some questions were not worded correctly. "About the life on Youtube?" "Want get SMG4's autograph?" These are highly incorrect to what they actually asked in the video and misreading them did not help matters.

Also, your responses to answering the questions was absolutely appalling.

If you're gonna write a plot summary, please look at other good articles for reference. We don't want a child's inner thoughts here. 