Talk:SM64: War of the Fat Italians 2014 (200k Special!)/@comment-3551372-20141028062228

1. How do we know X was enraged at SMG4 in the swag one? This is why I typed it in the first place in the way I did with what I had on the screen dammit.

2. Enough with the opinions. ("Yeah let's just go with "smoke"" is not what you put on a wiki page) Also, with things as insignificant as a list, you just put many things. You don't document each line of an argument down just as with a list. Better flow.

3. You don't really need links to characters in the main paragraphs bit because that's what the characters section is for. It's redundancy to put two links leading to the exact same thing. Proper terms too.

4. Enough with the crossed text, if it's not what it is, get it out. Opinions not on the page please.

5. Will the common person reading these pages know "asphyxiate" and "inertia"? This is why I made things simple, jesus this plot got nonked.

Refer to this post since you all appear to not have gotten this problem: http://supermarioglitchy4.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:17522